that was really good, and i mean that. awesome job with the writing, its hard to believe that youve never written a chaptered story before...great job also with the descriptions of the characters, and great job also with describing Holly. great job, angin. i look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thanks, and I hope you like the upcoming chapters :)
Ooh, and now the fun begins. Poor Holly, I wonder what Voldy wants with her. But wasn't Harry supposed to kill Voldy? I mean, it is what, 15 years later....*laughs* You really had to leave us hanging there, though. Great job!!!
Author's Response: *Thanks you* Yes, the fun begins! Who said Voldy kidnapped her? All it said is that he has her now...I bet he'd want a death eater to do the dirty work for him. The question is, who?
A Child Gone Missing
I'm really enjoying this fic. It's funny how Ashley and Claire go to school with the kids of the people Harry and Ginny went to school with, and how they're all in their year. I love how you describe the kids' personalities, I can imagine just how they act in my head. Great job!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 2 will be up as soon as possible.
Men and Their Food
Aww, Holly seems to be so sweet. Since she looks like Lily, I wonder what his other daughters look like. I laughed at Harry's reaction to Holly needing to be changed, it's exactly like I would expect him to be like, he is a guy after all. *laughs* Great job!!!
Author's Response: Thank you :) In the next chapter you will meet the other daughters.