Reviews For Motorcycle Oil

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Reviewer: AmericanStreetWitch (Signed)
04/14/2006 11:14 am

*sniff* sniff* i'm trying not to cry. I felt so bad for Harry when he lost Sirius... and I can just picture him at Grimmauld Place, trying to come to terms with the man's death.

Even when Sirius came into the picture in POA, I had a feeling that he wouldn't survive the whole series. I knew he was going to die sometime, but I didn't know when or how.(I was kind of hoping it would be in the last book).

This really reached out to me and I liked it a whole lot. You wrote it just right.

Author's Response: I know what you mean; I cried when Sirius died so its okay. Thanks very much! I'm happy you enjoyed the story, I figured that Ms. Rowling forgot this part of the story and I took up the task of fixing the mistake for her ;o) Thanks for taking the time out to review!

Reviewer: Arnel (Signed)
12/25/2005 12:01 am
This is really good, one of the best Post-OotP fics I've read. It's incredibly sensitive to Harry's state of mind without being maudlin or mushy; you've captured the essence of Harry exceptionally well. I really enjoyed reading your story.

Author's Response: thank you so much arnel! that really means a lot to me -- i was hoping to have it not be too mushy because that sort of gets annoying after a while. thanks again and im happy you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
12/24/2005 01:58 pm
That was very touching, you really feel for Harry when you read it. I loved the Motorcycle Oil twist, couldn't help but laugh a bit at the end. I would've never expected Harry to agree to go, but for Remus I can understand. Great job!!!

Author's Response: i really tried to feel like Harry would've (at least how I thought he would've) and im happy you think it was a good interpertation! for some reason, i always felt like he smelled like motorcycle oil... i guess cuz he was so attached to his own motorcycle, it made sense to me. anyway, thanks!!! happy you enjoyed it and happy holidays!

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