This was really sweet. The lyrics really went with the story. Great job!!
Author's Response: thank you very much!
Three Years Time
Ooh very nice! I've heard the song a few times, and it fits with your story quite well. I love how you tied the song in with their last lines :)
Author's Response: thank you very much, I really love the song so I decided randomly to write a story with it. happy you like it -- thanks again!
Three Years Time
That was sweet. I like the way you described what happened, but jumped ahead each time and didn't tell what happened in between, which makes me draw my own conclusions. I'll have to get that song, lol. Great job!!
Author's Response: thanks so much, i'm happy that you enjoyed it! lol the song is really great. and it fit the way i wanted to write the story perfectly. thanks again!
Three Years Time