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Reviewer: Calamur (Signed)
10/23/2006 01:01 pm
It's a very interesting start. You might want to give each paragraph a spacing because it looks like one gigantic paragraph! Can't wait to read more


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Reviewer: dancefreak92 (Signed)
07/16/2006 04:23 pm
This is a good story so far. Keep writing!



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Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
01/30/2006 05:34 am
Wow, this is a scary Harry Potter -- admittedly, though, I did think he could potentially go this way at the end of OoTP. One nit: There were three tasks, not four, in the Triwizard Tournament. Otherwise, intriguing start.

Author's Response: I know that there were only three 'official' tasks, but the fourth task was fighting Old Voldie in the graveyard.



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Reviewer: YelloWitchGrl (Signed)
01/06/2006 11:14 am
That was a very intense and promising start. I haven't really read much with an angry Harry but I would like to know more about how his friends betrayed him.


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Reviewer: jackie (Anonymous)
12/29/2005 10:01 pm
i liked the first chapter, keep writing more!


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