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Reviewer: Calamur (Signed)
08/30/2006 12:16 pm
hmmm.. it's nice, but something is missing..maybe I find it too short. Anyway, on to the next chapter
Reviewer: Calamur (Signed)
08/30/2006 12:14 pm
interesting start.. just one thing...will we know how or why Peter transformed?
beginings: Prologue
Reviewer: jayley (Signed)
04/22/2006 01:05 am
Reviewer: Lizzie22153 (Signed)
12/20/2005 11:12 pm
Reviewer: claudia (Anonymous)
12/05/2005 08:45 am
the idea and how you are treating it is interesting but the chapters look like half done. I'm, you cut them in the middle of scene, not with a cliffhanger or anything like that. Maybe they could be a bit longer to give some closure?
Author's Response: yeah... sorry about that but their already broken and i hate leaving big cliffhangers because its something i cant stand (waiting a week to find out the ending of some really big problem) but i've only writen so much and am trying to get more up there TTFN TA TA FOR NOW!
Author's Response: yeah... sorry about that but their already broken and i hate leaving big cliffhangers because its something i cant stand (waiting a week to find out the ending of some really big problem) but i've only writen so much and am trying to get more up there TTFN TA TA FOR NOW!
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Reviewer: GryffinGal (Signed)
12/04/2005 08:48 pm
I like this plot. I feel so bad for Harry, he has no idea where he is!! Great job, I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
12/01/2005 02:03 pm
That was great! Poor little Harry, he doesn't even know who those people are yet. I like how this is going, nice plot. Great job!!
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