Reviews For On The Run

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Reviewer: MarauderQueen (Signed)
01/30/2007 09:32 pm
Please update soon!!! I want to find out what happens next!!!!


High School
Reviewer: Cyborg (Signed)
11/27/2006 04:12 pm

Not bad. I would highly suggest an actual prologue on how Sirius found Harry, and what exactly happened ten years before. It would drop the reader into the story at the beginning instead of dropping them in halfway through. 

Also, avoid author's notes inside the body of the story.

This was great! I am always interested in "what if" stories, like, "What if Harry was actually happy during his childhood?"




Ten Years Later
Reviewer: brit (Anonymous)
10/31/2006 09:36 am
ABSOLUTEL LUV IT!!!! FINISH IT ASAP!!!!


High School
Reviewer: dancefreak92 (Signed)
06/22/2006 11:31 pm
This is really good. Update soon please!


Ten Years Later
Reviewer: destin4fl (Anonymous)
12/01/2005 12:24 pm
interesting, i love AU there are so many intriguing turns it makes for a great read. one small note though, less time on what we already know and more time on what we don't... loke how sirus escaped and some of the run in as he and ahrry stay one step ahead of the aurors. otherwise great stuff!


Ten Years Later
Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
11/30/2005 04:22 pm
That was great! I like the start of this story, very intriguing. I would have loved to see what ended up happening in the booksif this did happen. I'll look forward to your update. Great job!!


Ten Years Later
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