Wow! Awesome effects this potion has! I like the idea of this most intimate connection between them.... And you say this goes on for the rest of their lives?! Sheesh, Malfoy's gonna find THAT hard to bear...
Well, well- I knew I liked you the moment I read your author's note about 'hence'.... ;) And this is one of my favorite ships... This was very well written, nice dialogue and characterization (especially the bit about Ron's childish behaviour!). The potion seems quite complicated and fascinating. Enjoyed the way Hermione's heart leaps at Ron's smile even though she's over him- somehow these things happen! Wierd... I've had it on occassion too... ;) Anyway, good job! I look forward to reading the rest of the story!