That was wonderful! You wrote probably what Abus was after the Penseive perfectly! That was a nice thing Minerva did, stun him so he can't drink anymore or go on like that and to just sleep it off. Great job!!!
Out of everything you have ever written... this peice definitely hold the most emotion. I could feel McGonagall and Dumbledore's pain. You conveyed the emotion well. My only real question in when this took place... I can figure it out.
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