I'm not that convinced by the characters feelings...
Perhaps I'm too influenced by a "fair Harry" perfect character, but somehow I doubt he would go find Cho while having feelings for Ginny.
The style is Ok and the description are smooth, but I don't like that much the interaction between H, G and Cho
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