Very interesting beginning. Cant wait to read more.
Nice, I like it how you keep to the tempo and don't ruch anything.
Now If you turned Harry into a vampire that would be great!
Oh, could you possible send me a mail when you update next?
An attack at twilight
OH my! How scary... very well-written, 'tis rather creepy to think about poor Harry being watched by Voldemort...
Wow, that was intriguing. Harry does need to study, and I think he should have started way before now in the books. I like how you described Voldy, and didn't come right out and tell us who he was. Great job!!!