Great story, it's extremly dark and suspensful. I love it! 10/10.
Ahhh, it seems we have a cliffie here. That's EVIL, you know. But you can redeem yourself by updating. *clears throat* Sooo... please update! PLEEEEASE?!
Great start! Lots of action and an intriguing plot. I can't wait to see what happens to Harry with the Vampire. The Order will be frantic looking for him, I'm sure. It will be interesting to see what plans the Vampire has for Harry and where they're going to. Keep up the good work!