Reviews For Bleed

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Reviewer: animimares (Signed)
01/18/2007 12:48 pm

This was amazing. Wow. I love trauma fic, it's the best kind. Hermione has a very clear narrative voice, even though you've chosen to write it in second person's point of view (which I adore, don't worry). The friendship and need in the Trio interaction is wonderful. So much love for this. So much love.

~ animimares




Bleed (One-Shot)
Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
05/30/2006 11:14 pm
I'm not sure I've ever seen anyone tackle cancer in the Wizarding world -- certainly not like this. I really liked the constant ticking of the clock as Hermione waits.


Bleed (One-Shot)
Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
01/14/2006 11:58 am
that was so....wow. that was awesome, even though Hermione was in the hospital. great job.


Bleed (One-Shot)
Reviewer: Arnel (Signed)
11/19/2005 11:40 pm
I'm confused. If Hermione hasn't ever smoked is there a reason she's stricken with lung cancer? You don't say why and it seems to me that she would ask that question herself. Criticisms aside, you've written a very nice story. Your characterizations are very believable, especially that Ron doesn't understand what's to happen to Hermione and that Harry does and can even tease her about it a little. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Author's Response: First of all, thanks for your review. I'm always happy to get criticism from my readers, so to speak. As to the confusion, I admit, it was my fault. But not only smoking can cause lung cancer: ""Competing risk factors" such as secondhand smoke, asbestos, radon, occupational exposures, age, race, sex, and heredity also may play a role in lung cancer development (see Lung Cancer Risk Factors). " In Hermione's case, it would be hereditary. Hope that clears something up. :) Thanks again!



Bleed (One-Shot)
Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
11/19/2005 03:58 pm
Wow, that was very touching. Poor Hermione. You really can feel what she's feeling. Great job!!


Bleed (One-Shot)
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