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Reviewer: anonymus (Anonymous)
03/27/2007 06:47 pm
Amazing....UPDATE


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Reviewer: MarauderQueen (Signed)
02/03/2007 10:00 pm
Please update soon!! This is a very good story, and I want to find out if anything interesting happens. I also noticed a mistake that you made at the beginning of the chapter. You accidently said David used to be Harry Potter, it had been two years since he had that name, now he went by Jason Smith. I think you meant to put Jason there. It would be a good idea to fix that, because somebody could get confused. 


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Reviewer: snitchseeker (Anonymous)
11/27/2006 11:16 pm
i am begging you to update your stories!!!!puhlease????


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Reviewer: buttmunch (Anonymous)
03/04/2006 03:03 pm
british people dont celebrate thanksgiving its an entirely american thing


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Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
01/30/2006 06:01 am
A bit of an inconsistency between the first and second chapters: at the end of the first one, I had the distinct impression that Harry/Jason could hear. However, I do like the idea, I've never really seen anything like this done before, with Harry losing his hearing. I'm rather curious about the interview, especially if anyone from the "old crowd" (Dumbledore, McGonagall, Flitwick, etc) are still there.


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Reviewer: Madeline Fabray (Signed)
01/30/2006 05:53 am
Horrifying, that Harry would be used and trained as a weapon. It fits, though. I think dialogue could give this an additional "punch," but you are off to a good start.


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Reviewer: Lizzie22153 (Signed)
12/20/2005 03:27 pm
love it.


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Reviewer: Ashlleigh (Anonymous)
12/19/2005 06:37 am
plz update


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Reviewer: Mstiquerose (Anonymous)
12/18/2005 10:26 pm
Great story! I like how this is a different plot line than the rest of your stories that you write. So far it's really interesting. Awesome writing and keep up the great work! Hope you post more soon!


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Reviewer: Warlock (Anonymous)
11/25/2005 09:26 am
I like it! One thing though, if he's death why would he have music posters?


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