Holes In His Pockets
Reviews For That's The Way The World Crumbles
Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
04/11/2006 01:44 am
Reviewer: mugglenet27 (Signed)
01/28/2006 02:15 pm
Very nice...you have painted a wonderful picture here. You can really imagine the pain Harry is going through...
Holes In His Pockets
Reviewer: Serenitee (Signed)
12/31/2005 09:47 am
Reviewer: malko050987 (Signed)
11/17/2005 03:02 am
Great drabble. A lot of angst....
I could picture him, wlking though a darkened alley, in worn, torn clothing, gazing at an old photo of Ginny, with his face full of regret... *tear*
Great work. :D
-Crs
I could picture him, wlking though a darkened alley, in worn, torn clothing, gazing at an old photo of Ginny, with his face full of regret... *tear*
Great work. :D
-Crs
Holes In His Pockets
Reviewer: destin4fl (Signed)
11/13/2005 10:18 am
is this a prolouge? of so this has a lot of potential.... otherwise you created a lot of angst with excellent imagry but go no where and leave the reader high and dry.... otherwise excellent writing.
Holes In His Pockets
Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
11/13/2005 10:02 am
That was great! Poor Harry, he always has to go through so much. You wrote his feelings nicely, great job!
Holes In His Pockets