Reviewer: ice princess (Anonymous)
08/07/2005 04:55 pm
Yes, things are totally making sense now. :) I wondered what you meant when you said that they'd get together, but not like I might expect. I have to say that I love the way they got together. It's been a while since I've seen a bonding story, and I'm glad to see the concept back again. :) And the whole 'must have a baby' thing is a great addition. I hope we'll get to see some of the action next chapter, if you know what I mean. ;) Keep up the great work and I look forward to your next update.
Author's Response: *blushes* no action... I'd be beet red for a week but ah well. Anyway, thanks! I'm glad you liked it. The concept came to me and I was so anxious to explore what a bonding could look like (both good and bad) Anyway, I'm glad it's starting to make sense but believe me, the surprises aren't done yet. Who's the "bad guy" is a good place to start. :-)
Chapter 1: The First Puzzle Piece