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Very nice! You've displayed the emotional impact that the Diary hd very well. Very thorough explaination of her thoughts.
P.S. Warthog? LOL!
This is a nice little bit of character exploration for Ginny! Though I am not quite sure what it is she burned, nor what she was writing on. Or to. The story is not completely clear, and sometimes goes back and forth between tenses.
What I liked best about it is that you have her character down well, I think, and I got a chuckle out of her Patronus being a warthog. I lvoed the story about the princess and dragon and how she and Ron played. And how it let her make her Patronus.