Great fic. The character development was done in a believable way that makes the reader think it ws just as natural as life itself. I have to say that this has to be one of my favorite one-shots, and since i usually only read chapter-type fics, that is saying somehing. Keep up the great writing and just as a sidde note, I have yet to find anything wrong with what you have written on this site. Great Job!
Author's Response: Thank you, that is quite a compliment. *blushes* This was a branch out for me, trying something new, and it was quite the struggle, so it's nice to see that the readers appreciate it. I have several ideas in my head for another one-shot (sorry no chapter stories until HBP) and I should have another one up next week. Anyway, thanks for the review and letting me know and I'm glad you like my writing.
Author's Response: Note to self: END OF SIYE reviews
Charming story, great pacing and plot development- you did a wonderful job. Did I mention that I have warm fuzzies? I loved this story!
Author's Response: Thank you... for everything. This story was a struggle for me so it's nice to hear that I succeeded. :-)
Very cute! I've always wondered, if Ron and Hermione started to go out if they would ignore Harry. Great story!
Author's Response: That's what I wonder too... although I would hope that they wouldn't. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the review!
Excellent job. I loved the slow pace. Moving from a solid friendship first into romance. Ginny knows how to set a scene for seduction. "I'm going to teach you to dance."
Author's Response: Thank you... I thought it was a really romantic way to transition as well :-) I also really believe that the best relatioships start off as friendships first.
I loved this! I really enjoyed the pace you set, the whole story had a very natural progression. I've been a victim of my best friends getting together before, so I enjoy it when people write stories where it is an adjustment period for Harry. Job well done!
Author's Response: Thank you... I'm glad you liked it. This story was a learning experience for me... generally I rush my one-shots (although I still like them) I wanted to try it slow and see how it went. The plot came to me one night (when I should have been sleeping) and I got up to write it all down before I could forget. :-D I have lots of great plots that go straight out of my head *sigh* Anyway, I'm glad you liked it and thanks for letting me know!
Wow! another great one! you´re great! well I hope you will get well soon. And I hope to read one of your fics in the new SIYE Challenge too! Adios, hasta pronto!
Author's Response: Thanks... slowly I am recovering. I have not even looked into the challenges but we'll see . Thanks for the encouragement.
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