Just came across this while searching around the site --- CUTE!! I loved how Harry was still acting young and Ginny was the one who had to keep everything in line. Seemed right. I especially LOVED the last line. Cracked me up... haha great job!
You know what would be brilliant? a story following this one. Where Ginny tells the story... what was said in the coommon room and harry's process of actually getting one. *evilgrin*
:D Definitely deserves a ten,
That was a really nice piece. The humorous bits were well written and the fluff was fun.
You might want to run it through a beta again as I noticed a few problems wioth tenses and spellings.
But overall a very good effort.
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