I don't know why, but I smiled and even chuckled. I suppose it is because I can imagine Harry's children standing up for him. Anyway, great job and I have to admit that I am glad you left the nature of their relationship ambigous at the end. It leaves the reader to be free to interpret which drives some people nuts, but I enjoy. :-)
Wow, that was really great! I was so sad, when Ginny was marrying Neville, but I'm glad it all worked out. Victoria, I like that name. Great job!!!