Ch.3 - - Very odd what happened to Harry. Obviously what did happen is to be revealed as a part of the plot of this tale of yours. / / / Harry is apparently stronger, faster, and more powerful as a wizard because of his unknown disapprearence. Fascinating and curious!
Ch.2 - - Very interesting developments in this story. You've left us with an internal cliff hanger (not at the end), with the disappearance, the potions, the incantations, and the time loss. I must know more. / / / It appears Harry was fighting Order members or such, although Tonks is not the only person on the planet who could have purple hair, even though she is the only one in canon to do so thus far. / / / Regardless of who they were, they should know better than to try to sneak up on our hero - after all, this is Harry Potter we are talking about. / / / It was a very nice little fight scene. I love a good battle. / / / I can't wait for the next chapter. Cheers!
Ch.1 - - This was a full and satisfying chapter. You've made a very different start to the summer of the sixth year, and different is almost always good. / / / Yours is probably the best "Avenging Wrath of Mother Molly" I have seen in fanfiction. I love the way she blasted Snape across the room and dictated terms to Dumbledore / / / Also in this vein, telling the tale from Molly's perspective is quite unique and also well done. I have seen her POV before, but only for sections of chapters. / / / You did a wonderful job of showing the dejectedness of all of the Weasleys over missing Harry. Each was given a unique mental attitude, and explained well, in a net-net fashion. Brief and well stated is hard to do, but you did it. I rarely seem to. / / / Truly well done!
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