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Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
11/01/2005 09:14 am
Ch.3 - - Very odd what happened to Harry. Obviously what did happen is to be revealed as a part of the plot of this tale of yours. / / / Harry is apparently stronger, faster, and more powerful as a wizard because of his unknown disapprearence. Fascinating and curious!


Chapter 2: Eight Weeks in a Day
Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
11/01/2005 09:13 am
Ch.2 - - Very interesting developments in this story. You've left us with an internal cliff hanger (not at the end), with the disappearance, the potions, the incantations, and the time loss. I must know more. / / / It appears Harry was fighting Order members or such, although Tonks is not the only person on the planet who could have purple hair, even though she is the only one in canon to do so thus far. / / / Regardless of who they were, they should know better than to try to sneak up on our hero - after all, this is Harry Potter we are talking about. / / / It was a very nice little fight scene. I love a good battle. / / / I can't wait for the next chapter. Cheers!


Chapter 1: Lonely Reflections
Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
11/01/2005 09:12 am
Ch.1 - - This was a full and satisfying chapter. You've made a very different start to the summer of the sixth year, and different is almost always good. / / / Yours is probably the best "Avenging Wrath of Mother Molly" I have seen in fanfiction. I love the way she blasted Snape across the room and dictated terms to Dumbledore / / / Also in this vein, telling the tale from Molly's perspective is quite unique and also well done. I have seen her POV before, but only for sections of chapters. / / / You did a wonderful job of showing the dejectedness of all of the Weasleys over missing Harry. Each was given a unique mental attitude, and explained well, in a net-net fashion. Brief and well stated is hard to do, but you did it. I rarely seem to. / / / Truly well done!


Prologue: The Boy Who Vanished
Reviewer: 10dedfish (Anonymous)
10/23/2005 04:39 am
I like the story line so far. And I also cant wait for the next chapter. you could setup a yahoo group or the like so you can email everyone when new chapter gets posted.

Author's Response: Hmmm...that is a thought...I'll have to think about it.



Chapter 1: Lonely Reflections
Reviewer: jedge1 (Signed)
10/21/2005 10:49 pm
Sounds interesting so far, looking forward to the next chapter.


Chapter 1: Lonely Reflections
Reviewer: rdprice29 (Signed)
10/19/2005 11:50 pm
I so love this story of yours; I was disappointed when you said you were discontinuing it...but I hope the fact that you're posting it here means that you're un-discontinuing it! Love it! Great job.

Author's Response: Rachael...the plan is for me to continue it. I just completed Chapter 5 recently...and am in the process of writing the first interlude.



Prologue: The Boy Who Vanished
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