Wonderful! I really, really liked it, especially the part about being in the rain... I think it would be very cool to be engaged in the rain.
And the end was uber-sweet, which I especially need right now.
That was so cute! I loved it! It was great how James tricked Lily into coming out into the rain, at first I thought he was going with Remus, but I was wrong. If only it was longer, this scene would be good in a fic, lol. Great job!
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