Very well done! Ginny's "feline" activities during the confrontation with Greyback were particularly memorable.
And it's a good thing Maureen/Raksha isn't pregnant! Still, "traumatized" would seem to be an understatement in her case.
Quite well done! Interesting/amusing little allusion to Tolkein's work, there. :-)
And Harry's desire to reduce Snake-Face Tom's "support structure" before going after him appears well-placed, IMHO. As well as his reticence to deal with the Ministry in general & Scrimgeour in particular. :-}
Looks to be a bit of politics & horse-trading coming soon....
Yes, Madame Maxime would seem to be a good person to chat with Kat. Interesting development, that bit with Kat & the giants (in general).
The Hermione-Harry interaction looks to have been catalyzed by way too much stress. Folks do strange things under stress, as you show.
Love the storyline. I do think you need to put something in the story to create breaks between areas of the story. Makes it easier to follow that way. (IE, between "Thank you." and "That was brutal." said Ron collapsing into a chair). Other than that, Good work!
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