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Reviewer: sophianwin (Signed)
05/15/2006 05:26 pm

I'm a little confused at this point, especially since you brought in all of the characters so quickly. I'll read it more carefully later, your characters do seem interesting, and your writing is great! I loved how you characterized Peter as someone who wasn't as stupid as a lot of the other fanfiction writers portray him as.

As you can see, I'm a huge stickler for creativity...and a huge hypocrite. Hopefully, you won't think me so. My own story is just beginning, so...right. No more blatant self-advertising.

Do forgive me, and keep up the great work,

sophianwin 




Year One: Beginnings
Reviewer: sophianwin (Signed)
05/15/2006 05:20 pm
I did love the minister, but I have to say that Jo never did mention that they were married...then again, she never said that they weren't married. This seems promising, as long as your characters (especially the female ones) are not too perfect (as this tends to happen with Marauders story). I trust you though, because you have talent!



Prologue: Wedding Bells
Reviewer: Jojo0402_XoXo (Signed)
03/14/2006 09:00 pm
This looks like it's headed in a good direction. I really wiould like to see where you are going with this.


Prologue: Wedding Bells
Reviewer: Rosethorne (Anonymous)
01/28/2006 11:03 am
What is that it????? Don't leave me like this. I have to know the story behind this moment. Who is wedding whom? Okay obvously Lily is wedding James but what of the others?

Author's Response: Heh, so sorry, no one really reviewed, so I stopped the story, I'll have to dredge it up again and hope I didn't delete it...^_^'

Author's Response: Heh, so sorry, no one really reviewed, so I stopped the story, I'll have to dredge it up again and hope I didn't delete it...^_^'



Prologue: Wedding Bells
Reviewer: Zayne (Signed)
10/19/2005 06:32 pm
I found this very interesting, as I'd never thought of them sharing a wedding. Now that I think of it, however, it's rather sweet. The minister was refreshingly un-serious, which I truly enjoyed. However, the end bothered me slightly, because it seemed to flip over from story to you talking rather abrubtly. In any case, a wonderfully written peice.


Prologue: Wedding Bells
Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
10/13/2005 07:34 pm
This seems like a really good start, a short one, but good. I can't wait to see what happens next, though! It seems like it'll be a good fic.

Author's Response: Thanks, Luna...it's my first Marauders fic, so I'm hoping it will go ok. It will probably take me a bit to write it, since I don't know how long it'll be, and I have a bit of a time-lack right now...



Prologue: Wedding Bells
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