*Snort* Like I have to do anything to your chapters anyway, LOL. They're pretty good without me muddling in them...but don't stop sending them to me early! :D
Excellent chapter, I just love this story.
I like it very much, I hope in this one you not only focus in H/G ship, (which I like a lot and enjoy the details), but also would like to see the development of Herm/R ship as well. I hope I can enter the chat tonight. :-)
Ch.1 - - A nice start to a sixth year tale. You develop ideas very well, and come up with a plausible explanations for the failure in Divination and Occlumency.
Knowing your creative (slightly bent) mind, I bet the solutions will get even more exciting.
Can't wait. Cheers!
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