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Reviewer: tswee24 (Anonymous)
04/22/2006 04:56 am

Cedric's alive?!? I enjoyed reading this chapter.



Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed it :)  Yes, I loved Cedric as a character in the books, and felt he died needlessly, so I found a way to bring him back.  I hope to post the next chapter soon.



The Youngest Ever Hogwarts Professor
Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
10/13/2005 07:24 pm
I think you may have plagerized the scene after the song in the beginning, so I'm not reading anymore. Sorry to say, but I don't like fics that are plagerized. It may be just me, but at first it just sounded familiar. I showed a few of my friends and they said it was out of the Order of the Phoenix. I liked the first two chapters though, the third just wasn't as well written in my opinion. I just thought you should know, I'm not trying to be too rude or anything. :D

Author's Response: I do not plagarize, and I am sorry you feel that it is. I may have used the ideas from Phoenix, but the scene was my own. I have never plagarized anything in my life and I'm not about to start now. I'm glad you stuck it out this long, though. If you read the next chapters, I promise you nothing is plagarized. Thanks for reading. ------Harry4Ever =)



Sort and Sever
Reviewer: LunaMoon224 (Signed)
10/08/2005 07:07 pm
That was really great! Giselle seems like an interesting character; I can't wait to find out what house she's going to be in! How could a person just be so perfect, is what I'm wondering. There's a lot of mysteries that go along with this I guess, with the Firebolt 2 and all. Not to mention the Head Girl thing, why she got it in only 5th year really surprises me. Great Job!

Author's Response: Yes, there is more to Giselle than meets the eye...please read on to find out! If you would like to contact me, I'll be glad to explain things if they are not clear...as long as they don't give away the plot...lol Keep reading/reviewing! I love feedback! -------Harry4Ever =)



Giselle Sauvé
Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
09/26/2005 03:40 pm
Ch.2 - - Sorry, too much that won't click. You've got the start of a great tale, but several things rub wrong: 1) Hermione would never discuss others or her body parts with Harry and Ron - the hair possibly. 2) Giselle would never be Head Girl and an unSorted new student. 3) She'd never be Head Girl and a fifth year. 4) Hermione would never call her humble and down to earth with all of the bragging and name dropping she did. 5) There would be a cat fight between Hermione and Giselle about two minutes after she walked into the compartment. 6) Suggesting the use of the Killing Curse on Malfoy would have upset Draco AND our three favorite Hogwarts students. There is a lot you can do with this. It plays well, but these things need to, and can be fixed. Sorry to be hard on you. I like your writing. I hope I sound like I'm just being constructive - that is my intention. Best regards-

Author's Response: Well, I'm sorry you feel that it's not sticking to cannon...it's OBVIOUSLY AU. Giselle is Head Girl because of an agreement between herself and Dumbledore which involves Harry...so the appointment stands. As for a cat fight between Hermione and Giselle...that will never happen. Giselle was only giving Malfoy a scare...she would never have the heart to do so. I'm sticking to my story...but thank you for your kind but constructive criticism. If I do feel obliged to do so, perhaps I will rewrite the story to make more of a canonic sense...and that will be a BIG if! Once again, I thank you for pointing out what won't work...but if you read on...when I post the next few chapters...you will see where I intend to take this. Please don't feel that you have offended me in any way. I will seriously consider revising...just not right now. Hope you understand and enjoy the rest when it's posted. ------Harry4Ever =)



Giselle Sauvé
Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
09/26/2005 03:02 pm
Ch.1 - - Interesting start. Struggles a little in light of OotP, but, as this is obviouslt pre-OotP, I can see it being constructed this way. This was a good review of the story-to-date, and set up an interesting complexity with a new girl in Harry's life. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked the start. I know this is a bit AU...so hopefully you will understand that it will not stick to canon as much...I never edited it to stick to canon. Thank you for your review ----Harry4Ever =)



An Unexpected Crush
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