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Reviewer: Zetera (Signed)
05/06/2006 09:48 pm
Another excellent chapter. Even though the passages on bow manufacture were rather involved, they were enthralling enough in themselves to keep me hooked. I love little Lindern - he's a great character. I laughed out loud during the conversation between Willen, Haana, Aldini and Aldertan - it was very Monty Python-esque. Great job as usual, and thanks for the swift update!

Author's Response: Zetera, You have been one of my few reviewers for this tale. For that I am truly grateful. You have missed chapters six and seven, I believe. I am about to post the final chapter, eight, and then it will be gone from the left hand column at WT. I just don't want my only fan for this work on WT to miss out. Thanks again ancd cheers!



Chapter Five - DragonSlayer? Who, me?
Reviewer: Zetera (Signed)
05/04/2006 12:20 pm
I'm delighted to hear that this story is completed; I can't wait to hear what happens next! You have become evil by leaving the chapter at a cliffhanger, but you are forgiven as it's such a compelling story!


Chapter Four - "Mah-ghee-kahl!"
Reviewer: Zetera (Signed)
05/02/2006 10:33 am
Yay - up the Irish! Loved that bit. This whole chapter was great; your characters are astonishingly well-rounded and developed. I'm really looking forward to seeing how this plays out.


Chapter Three - Accio Magik!
Reviewer: Zetera (Signed)
05/02/2006 09:37 am
This chapter was even better than the last. I love your writing style, and the idea of Willen knowing the purpose of the wood is unique and wonderful to read.


Chapter Two - Willen's Luck
Reviewer: Zetera (Signed)
05/02/2006 09:20 am
An extremely interesting take on the Potter universe. I never saw this coming. I really enjoy the historical facts you incorporate into the story - it lends a sense of realism to it all. Congratulations on becoming the author of the fortnight - it is well deserved.


Chapter One - Long, Long Ago, Our Story Begins
Reviewer: GryffinGal (Anonymous)
09/30/2005 08:06 pm
I love this - It's so original! I don't think I've ever read a story about Ollivander's - no one has ever taken the time to expand upon the idea. I like what you've done with it, and I can't wait to read more!!!


Chapter One - Long, Long Ago, Our Story Begins
Reviewer: Zayne (Signed)
09/18/2005 04:42 pm
I love the interesting plot idea! I've never thought to wonder about the founding of Ollivander's. Constantia (no idea if I spelled that right o.O) is a bit Mary-Sue, but it fits well into the storyline and doesn't make me feel ill, as Mary-Sues usually do. Wonderful, I enjoyed reading it :)

Author's Response: Constantia is 13 in a backwards era with doting parents and a whole town that loves her and protects her. Everyone grows up quickly over the next three years. Thanks for reading and reviewing.



Chapter One - Long, Long Ago, Our Story Begins
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