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Reviewer: Lizzie22153 (Signed)
11/19/2005 01:30 pm
cool

Chapter 4 - Tombs and Tombes
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Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
09/26/2005 06:21 am
Ch.3 - - A shop that moves similarly to the Knight Bus, showing up where it is needed, is a fascinating concept - new and original in my fanfic experience. Wolington is a clever original character and I can't wait to see you flesh him out more.

Author's Response: Thanks Chapter 4 is being validated now!

Chapter 3 - Running
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Reviewer: Desslok (Signed)
09/20/2005 01:57 pm
Very good start. Personally, I think we can never get enough of Ginny-in-a-bikini. :) I'm looking forward to where you take this story.

Author's Response: Hey thanks! Chapter 4 out soon!

2) Powers and Secrets
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Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
09/13/2005 11:52 am
Ch.2 - - Oh, excellent. I really like Dobby helping Harry when I see it, and this looks to be a major factor in your story. Good. Be careful not to make Ginny-in--a-bikini too cliche. But nothing gets a teenaged boy think in the right direction like... Cheers!

Author's Response: Thankyou for your review, I just need a beta now!

2) Powers and Secrets
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Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
09/13/2005 11:44 am
Ch.1 - - This is a fine story you've started. It could use a little beta work, but looks better than mine BEFORE a beta reader. I like the way you have Harry slowly relating to Ginny. Harry is a teenager, they move fast, but not too fast. Good job. On to ch.2. Looking forward...

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