That's really good! I loved the whole idea for the diets, nice way to put it into Harry Potter and have it blend so well. I had a cat named Domino that was black and white once, lol. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks LunaMoon! After I read the news story I just knew I had to put Dudley through the same paces. I'm glad you are enjoying things. Thanks for the review!
You know, I was reluctant to read this based on the summary. Not sure why, cause it really is a great story. I like the notion of redeeming Dudley, though I'm wondering why he's reacting so positively so quickly! I hope he doesn't have some scheme. Looking forward to the next installment!!
Author's Response: Hmm.... Maybe I should improve my summary. Dudley is only as good or bad as the people around him. He doesn't think for himself and he's never been taught correct behavior. I am trying hard not to change him too much or too quickly. It's been my biggest challenge in this story. I'm glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for the review!
I can hardly wait for the next chapter! This is soooo good; I'm not sure whether I like the fact that Dudley is finally in trouble or that Harry is planting magical flowers in Aunt Petunia's garden more. I'm really glad that Harry has come to consider the garden as his own and that he's involved Neville in the development of it as well. I feel sorry for the Pixies, though, especially if Dudley has to be part of Harry's summer "chores" now that Uncle Vernon had put his foot down. Your idea is priceless and I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you Arnel! Harry's summer is sure to be more complicated than ever. Dudley has a lot of growning up to do (and Vernon & Petunia even more!). Thanks again :)
Dudley Gets Caught