Reviews For The Ring of Gold

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Reviewer: Ham (Signed)
09/07/2005 05:44 am
Your descriptions and narration are spot on. Very vivid. I even liked your plot...what I followed of it. But it was far too jerky and cryptic. The flow was just not right. The reader struggles to understand just what is happening. It is very, very confusing. I read it twice before i understood what had happened. You are obviously a very talented writer. I loved your descriptions..they were very vivid. But i suggest that you work on it a bit more.


The Incident at the Golden Gate
Reviewer: Lady of the Dragon (Signed)
09/03/2005 01:14 pm
Uhmm, the plot is thickening! Loved this chapter, I like the way Ginny is turning out. I can't wait for more! Cathy


A New Task
Reviewer: Lady of the Dragon (Signed)
09/01/2005 04:17 pm
Uhhh too much mystery!! I want some answers!! Please!!! Great story, by the way, your style is amazing. Cathy


An Uncomfortable Position
Reviewer: Lady of the Dragon (Signed)
08/30/2005 04:19 pm
Very mysterious... Can't wait to see where this will lead... Has loads of potential! Where does Harry fit in all this? Is he the black cloaked wizard? Or did he die, as Hermione seems to suggest? Or both, and he's just pretending to be dead? Uhmmm... Please update soon! :D Cathy


The Incident at the Golden Gate
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