I have hints on where you are going, but not enough to make a real guess. My mind keeps going back to Kreacher. It's obvious that Kreacher believes that Harry isn't dead. Why doesn't Ginny follow that lead more?
So, I take it that Hermione is strangely being Oblivated regularly by the DOM. Haryy isn't Harry anymore and people are following Ginny to get to Harry. I think that Ron has run into this new, but not improved, Harry and doesn't like what he saw. Hm...
I enjoyed the WWW scene and the drinking with Albert. I hope you update soon.
I'm confused as to why Hermione keeps leaving Ginny alone in her flat. Is it because Harry is there and she wants him to come clean with Ginny? I find myself backtracking a lot to figure out your leaps in plot. Overall I'm enjoying your story.
That's a very good beginning. I'm intrigued. Even after reading the ceiling scene twice to see is the black cloaked wizard was responsible for Charlie's death, I'm still not certain. One to chapter 2 :)
Wow, poor Ginny! She really is getting into a right mess... And she didn't even realize it before, lol. I love your story, I love how you never give us complete information, how we have to constantly try to feel in the blanks logically.
Great work! Keep it up!
And the plot thickens!! I have a feeling I was right in my supposition that the thie was Harry? Wanna give me a clue? Pweety please? No? Okay then, i just have to keep reading then, right?
Lol, anyway, love the chapter, your Ginny is turning out great!
Can't wait for more,
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