i love the whole bit of intrigue in this story! it is both dark and tense. harry has to be around cause i think thats half of ginny's problem! everyone who's in the know is obviously waiting for him to contact her or use her to make him show himself.... am i close? oh well on to the next chapter!
another excellent chapter. you have portrayed (sp?) ginny's anxity and confusion from all the differnet events perfectly. when she starts to have her panic attacks(/) its easy to get caught up in the excitement of the moment! great story!
excellent! the booby trapped shop is exactly how i imagine the twins dealing with thieves! you have the characters down so well you could beileve that you were on a first name basis with them! great story!
ok though everyone has tried hard to avoid talking about it... do they think harry is dead or just left? i am inclined to believe they believe he is dead from hermie's comment. but seeing in the third person makes me beileve he's still alive! great story!
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