Argh, this is such an engrossing mystery! Can't ... stop ... reading ... !
The plot thickens! I love this story so far. Your writing style is good enough to be professional, and I enjoy your minor characters as much as your major ones.
::chortle:: I love this chapter. Hilarious. If I were Ginny, though, I think I'd have left when Harrington started insinuating things about her relationship with Harry. Grr!
I'm enjoying this story. ::goes on to read next chapter::
yeah I guess that was an important chapter. Good story.
The ending for the 24th makes a good ending for the story too :)
Okay, so general impressions of the story :D
The plot is good. Definitely original, and I can see why you would need lots of detailed notes :) Usually, I can't stomach this type of story, simply because I don't like intrigues and politics, and you had both, in large amounts :)
But after I read the first few chapters I was drawn in, and couldn't stop reading :)
I love the Kreacher dialogues :D It's the dark humour that I like to read at times, and it fits perfectly with the general atmosphere of the story. You created a dark world, with danges around every corner, where confusion and deceit were at home :)
Very well written, altough not my usual choice for lecture :)
Thanks for "entertaining"
So, Grigore was trying to protect the world from that thing in the veil and ended up being corrupted by it? That doesn't explain why he suddenly turned on Harry, or for that matter exactly why Harry left the Brotherhood (how was more or less explained by Josef selling him out - a matter I'd love to get more details about).
But then, I really don't need all the answers, it's nice to keep the whole thing slightly mysterious. I loved this chapter by the way, I don't think I'd mentioned it... The changes Ginny went through were particularly evident.
ps: thanks, and it was really my pleasure, lol.
I don't have any more time to stay here, and I want to read it.
I'll let you know what I think. :)