Hmm... interesting premise. I especially like your characterizations of Ginny and Dobby. Very accurate, so far as I can see. Dumbledore, however, came across a little oddly, although I can't pinpoint why. Do update soon, please.
But her name is... oh, wait.. you caught that. :) Very nice story, though I wonder how pissed off she'd be that he made her think he was dead for so many months before popping out of nowhere. I'll be interested to see where you take this story. Thanks for writing and sharing it!
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