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Reviewer: Dragen (Signed)
02/11/2006 11:07 am
Good start, I hope you keep up the work.


Prologue
Reviewer: GryffinGal (Signed)
09/28/2005 08:42 pm
That was excellent - not to fast paced, not to slow. It was perfect. I also like how the switches between Harry and Matt are done - Very nice. Awesome job!!


Pixies and Pizza
Reviewer: Zayne (Signed)
09/11/2005 07:40 pm
Hmmm... interesting. I like the double stories, and this 'source' sounds quite interesting. I can't help but wonder what it is. Your characterization is quite good, and the story flows nicely. I know a lot about burns (trust me on this) and they are INCREDIBLY painful. Courtney strikes me as a bit Mary-Sue, but as long as it doesn't get out of hand it's no bother. Well written and very nice, I hope you write more!


We Begin With the Heroes
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