Reviews For For A Wish

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Reviewer: Dianne (Anonymous)
08/24/2005 10:36 pm
Wow! This is an awesome story! I love Meet Me In St Mungos and your husband is right, Voldemort singing I feel pretty would be hysterical, but one of the twins doing it instead was a riot as well and so like them! This story has everything from a 'Pretty In Pink' theme to angst and even humour. I thorougly enjoyed it. You have kicked the challenge up a notch for sure with this fabulous entry. I'm a sucker for a happy ending, so I loved the proposal! Thanks for a great read!!

Author's Response: *blushes* Thanks Dianne, I'm glad you liked it. I didn't know that it would have the whole run of emotions but I started depressing myself so I had to include something... I'm feeling all romantic too, so I had to go for a really happy ending. :-)

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Reviewer: wvchemteach (Signed)
08/24/2005 09:41 pm
Well...I think you captured Ginny perfectly in this. Her absolute frustration and misery at being dumped, ignored, and left behind. I thought you did a wonderful job, mixing angst and humor together to produce an entertaining tale.

Author's Response: Thank you! It was a roller coaster, that's for sure. I am glad that you enjoyed it :-)

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Reviewer: JPx (Signed)
08/24/2005 09:33 pm
I love this story so! I swear you amaze me everytime you write these things! Keep it up, like always :)

Author's Response: *hugs* Thanks!!

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Reviewer: Desslok (Signed)
08/24/2005 05:08 pm
Excellent entry that makes it that much more unlikely that my feeble attempt at this challenge will win! Curse you!!!! :) Seriously, this story really is a roller-coaster ride emotionally. I was reminded of the movie "Sixteen Candles" to some degree. :) I think it works perfectly as is, though I'd not complain to see more, of course.

Author's Response: Bah! I am glad you enjoyed it but don't count yourself out yet. I love the movie Sixteen Candles... but I hadn't thought of that when I wrote it, however it does seem like that with the emotions all over the place. :-)

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Reviewer: Tron (Anonymous)
08/24/2005 04:19 pm
Well done! You captured the feelings of everyone very well. This story had humor, angst, etc. I would love to see you continue with this story or, at the least, one more chapter that details the defeat of Voldemort and the aftermath - maybe even the wedding. Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you think so and I might consider a second chapter after I finish my other story :-)

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Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream (Signed)
08/24/2005 04:05 pm
Good story, as expected. Looks as if a few typos escaped the proofreading process. Cute trick of Hermione's with the candle. :-} Would have been worthwhile, I think, to get the reactions of the rest of the family to the proposal & response.

Author's Response: Doh! Well, we did try and catch them all and I thought about sending it to you. Ah well. I was trying to keep it at a managable length but the family's reaction would have been fun, especially Molly yelling at them :-D

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