Well, I chose to do the unusual and read the outtakes before the main story, mostly cause I had time enough for 2 chapters, but not 30+. :) The Ron chapter is really perfect. Ron is such a great character (well, yeah, they all are, but...) and you've captured him perfectly here. It stands alone perfectly. The Twins bit probably makes a lot more sense in context of the main story, which I will now put high on my To-Read list. I did love Ginny's "howler" though. :)
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