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Reviewer: CynthiaPotter (Signed)
08/25/2005 06:09 pm
Your first? really? Well, great job! I'm looking forward to reading about Rose and Ginny. They'll be in the same year won't they? hm, I've never read a story where Lily and James lives to raise Harry. And a sibling! that's great! *grin* With the marauders raising him and he knowing the Weasleys from toddledom up, it's bound to be good! Nice writing. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I have snippets of the two girls in the next chapters. Wait until they start at Hogwarts .



Prologue: Where it all began
Reviewer: rdprice29 (Signed)
08/25/2005 05:45 pm
Interesting how youíve changed Arthurís job and eliminated how poor the Weasleyís are. Thatís an interesting twist. I imagine though, with James, Sirius and the Longbottomís still around, a slightly different (and more prestigious) career path for Arthur would make sense. If nothing else, that would be 3 more prominent, pure-blood families with tolerance / fondness toward Muggles. Oh, man. A new generation of Marauders with the twins, Ron and Harry! I donít know if the school could survive, LOL! Great chapter!


First Time to Hogwarts
Reviewer: rdprice29 (Signed)
08/25/2005 05:32 pm
Great detail! Yes, Nevilleís character would be quite different if his parentís hadnít been tortured into insanity and he hadnít been raised by his overbearing grandmother, wouldnít it? And, with Harry being immersed in the wizarding world his whole life (with constant exposure to James, Sirius and Lupin), it totally makes sense he would do well in his classes. Great job on this chapter, Ben!

Author's Response: Thanks for all your reviews, Sorry about the late response. I'm still getting used to the site's methods. Stay tuned for the next update. As a reward for your review, I will tell you that the first year isnt't too different from the books, but it starts to change in the trio's second year and third year will be quite different.



Strange Goingson
Reviewer: Desslok (Signed)
08/25/2005 12:37 pm
Pretty darn impressive for a first fan fic! I'm interested to see where you will go with this. I'm especially intrigued (as an author) by what you will ultimately do with the Rose character. From a strictly "couples" point of view, one wonders who she ends up with, or if she is fated to die horribly somehow. Happy, well-adjusted Harry is also a character that should be interesting to see. :) Looking forward to the rest!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Just wait until she and Ginny get to Hogwarts. Harry may seem well-adjusted now, but he's entering the teen years. Stay tuned.



Prologue: Where it all began
Reviewer: rdprice29 (Signed)
08/24/2005 09:12 pm
This is such a great start! While I've read other "Harry's parents live" fics, I haven't read any which start quite like this, nor which have Harry getting an early start with the Weasley's, like I suspect you're headed in this fic. Great job! I am really looking forward to seeing where you take this story!


Prologue: Where it all began
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