Interesting revelations about Petunia and Remus; interesting conversation between Petunia and Harry.
I'm interested to see how you resolve the situation you've set up.
And keeping me interested in is very hard to do - good work.
This story is rapidly turning into a very painful and spiritual journey for Petunia Dursley - I like it quite a bit. Her seeing what she could - and should - have given Harry.
I'd like to know more about her and Remus, though!
I almost - almost - feel sorry for Petunia. I feel most sorry for Harry, who's stuck between them all, trying to find a way free.
*LOL* Nice house! My favorite part was when Molly agreed to stay - Petunia doesn't know what's coming!
Talk about arrogant! Dumbledore just doens't get it, does he?
I loved the scene with Molly and the bike! That was awesome!
Interesting that it was Hagrid who gave him the bike. How did he get to Little Whinging and how did he do so without attracting the Order's notice?
Still - good chapter. Great scene with leaving the Dursleys, especially Harry's comments to Petunia. I hope you follow up on the Lud thing with Petunia.
It sure seems like everyone is getting near the breaking point! I hope you manage to keep up the good work in future chapters, as this was very good.
I'd like to know more about 6h year, but - so far, you've kept a smooth, even pace and not dropped hints as to what happened during that missing year.
interesting beginnings; I don't usually read stand-alone post OotP 7th-year fics, but your summary caught my eye. I'm interested to see where you take this 'Lud' thing.