Author's Response: Yep. You editor types drive us crazy! My husband does the same thing - he doesn't read the story, he finds the mistakes. Ah well. Underhill will be posted soon. I had a small home crisis, lost the disc the story was stored on. But it has been located and is almost ready to be uploaded.
Author's Response: Well, it's good in a way. It will give them a chance to learn a bit about themselves as individuals, eh?