Not sure If this Story will be my thing but i'll keep reading for now and tell you what i think. (I don't yell at people for writing something i dont like when i can just stop reading it) It might be one of those great ones where you just have to get to the Harry/ Ginny parts (I REALLY like those) to start to really apreciate it. Though your style of writing is good.
Author's Response: Thank you - not every story is for everyone. That's why there are so many stories!
Incredible story. Just perfect! I can't say enough about how great this is. (Constructive feedback, I know.) I would say more, but I must go read the sequel!!!!
Author's Response: LOL - I love any feedback! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it! Hope you like the sequel just as much!
Just be forwarned, I don't want to be sad when this is over. You've created a very good story, and moved it along at a good pace. I cannot stop reading it. Am I going to wish I had? You've created that good a tale.
Author's Response: LOL - you know, I was warned much the same thing by a previous beta of mine. She told me if I killed off Nathan, she'd refuse to read anything I sent her. No worries - happy endings are why I write!
Instead of a reason for Borgin to be in Azkaban and still able to come back, this chapter holds that as a possible reason to write thte story in the first place. It's a good idea.
Author's Response: Oooo, that's an interesting thought...too late now, but an interesting plot bunny for the future, perhaps?