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Reviewer: joslinRhae (Anonymous)
03/03/2007 03:07 pm
Bella who??????I have no idea, but that was a funny fic, I liked the Wonky and Dibby...heheheh...


Save the Last Dance For Me
Reviewer: Marauder_Princess (Signed)
11/11/2006 02:35 am

Aww... somehow that was both cute and hilarious at the same time... Great job, I loved it and it's randomness! I hope you write another one!

 ~Marauder_Princess~




Save the Last Dance For Me
Reviewer: HermioneWeasley1972 (Anonymous)
01/31/2006 10:13 pm
Okay, i really enjoyed this. I annoyed the heck out of my husband because I was laughing so much but oh well, he needs to get a life. Very funny!


Save the Last Dance For Me
Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
09/30/2005 01:46 pm
Touching bit of fluff. Sad when I think about their demise, but a very well written piece of fluffiness. But James thinking some of the first years were hot is going too far. Other than that - great story.


Save the Last Dance For Me
Reviewer: Zayne (Signed)
09/11/2005 12:53 am
Hmmm... interesting. A nice buildup to a romance. I was in love with the use of "ALOHA," because I greet everyone that way :D A few things, though. One, There were a few times sentences were extrememly fragmented. Fragmented sentences are good for effect, but one or two times they were in the wrong place and sounded wrong. Also, there was not even hints of various plans that seemed to have been worked on the background, and it gave off the impression that you either don't know the alphabet or far too much was going on behind the scenes. Over all, I thought it was great :) Especially the part where they all play/sing so James and Lily can dance. And I loved how they didn't fall magically in love while dancing... it's an old and unrealistic cliche. Good job!


Save the Last Dance For Me
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