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Reviewer: Lionz_4_the_Cup (Signed)
03/12/2006 04:14 pm
that was excellent. i liked how you compared Sirius and Peter. great job.



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Reviewer: Aaran St Vines (Signed)
09/29/2005 03:59 pm
James' thinking will always be a mystery. No one I've read, and I've read little, has catured it to my way of thinking. But I think this is close. Very close indeed. Congrats.


Friend or Best Friend?
Reviewer: Zayne (Signed)
09/10/2005 11:30 pm
Interesting... I like the idea of James reflecting on the relationship between himself and Peter, especially compared to his relationships with Sirius and Remus. I can't imagine James would ahve gone for years trusting the rat without questioning his friendship at least once. I also liked the way the thoughts flowed into one another, as real people's thoughts do. It added a magic and realism to the writing. The ending was perfect... not enough to make me wonder why on earth James would have allowed him as secret keeper, but still not going against the entire thought process, which would have been stupid. Excellently written, I love it!


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