"Two shall be free and then burn..." Is Harry going to get his Phoenix? Just a thought...but when you said that Flamel and DD were concerned when the two Phonixes broke into song, I immediately wondered whether or not this was the intent. Anyway...continuing:
Three will become four: referring to Ginny joining the trio, perhaps? You've made a point to mention that several times so far. Four and eight shall stand: Four: the trio + Ginny. Eight: well, I'm not sure of that one yet...unless it has something to do with the Marauders...hmmm...I'm having too much fun trying to figure this out!
Yay! Go Sirius! Get that old Wormtail! I hope he beats him to a bloody pulp. Yay! Go Sirius again! You tell old DD what's up!
Oh my God. The scene with Perenelle, Harry and Ginny in which they go back into Ginny's memories is heart-shattering. That's all I can say.
Yay! You've given me more Lupin and Sirius, although their conversation gives me yet more to chew over. Looking up old school friends...does he mean James and Lily? Pettigrew? His old girlfriend?
All in all, very nicely done...I would comment more, but I am so sleepy that my fingers are twisting over themselves on the keyboard. Cheers!
Chapter 14: Love, Reign O'er Me