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I think this one is my favorite. It sums up everything Edward feels about himself and how hard he fights to keep from killing her.
Thank you! This was my fist attempt at EPoV, and nowadays, almost everything I write is from his perspective. It's nice to look back at this story. x
This one was a bit technical with all the explantions of the types of love but it was still a nice piece.
Thanks for the review. I really tried to see emotion in the same way Jasper would see them - intricate details such as different types of a particular emotion (love) included. I really wish I could have included his thirst too, but I ran out of words. x
Very good, very moody and wasa perfect renditions of Rosalie.
Thanks so much for all of your reviews! I'm glad you liked my Rosalie! :)
Very touching. Eseme has such a beautiful personality and you did a wonderful job with this one too.
Again, thanks for taking the time to review. Esme is such a lovely, kind character, despite all she's been through. :)
Another brilliant one shot. I love how you invoked the spirit of a teenage boy to write this, they think we know nothing about them but youve proved that theory wrong. Great job.
Thanks again! Yeah, most of my friends are teenage boys. Jake reminds me a lot of them. :)
Wow you did a wonderful job on this. You captured Alice so well and there were no mistakes or imperfections. It flowed well and made for a nice look into her life.
Thanks! Alice is so chirpy all of the time - I wanted to put her in a more depressing, serious situation. Glad you enjoyed it! x
‘Forever,’ she whispers once more, and I sigh.
This is, quite possibly, my favorite line. I think it captures the essence of your story perfectly and I also think you did a wonderful job capturing Edward's thought. Great job.
Thank you! This was my first attempt at EPoV, but since then I've become addicted to writing from his perspective. I'm glad you liked it. x
You've captured your character's voices very well. Alice, from her vibrant personality, to Jasper and the internal conflict he struggles with every day.
Welcome to WT!
Thank you! I love writing from different narrative prespectives. Each character is so different, it's like reading a new story through their eyes. I'm glad you liked it. x