What a nice little missing moment. I hate to think Hermione was using Viktor to make Ron jealous but it seems that she was. At lease she was able to admit that she was in love with Ron.
I don't think Hermione was using Viktor to make Ron jealous... more like she didn't know how to turn him down gently. I see her very much enjoying Viktor's companionship... but also coming to terms with her feelings for Ron.
Great job with Hagrid, you nailed his speech! And a good insight into what Hermione was going through with the Time Turner, the fight, and Hagrid's case. ~Gina :)
Thanks! I'm so glad you think I wrote Hagrid well. This story was basically written as a challenge to myself, to see if I could write dialects. :)
Another good missing moment! I especially liked the scene when Hermione met up with Penelope Clearwater. Ron's dialogue about Lockhart was perfect. I only would have liked to have seen more of Ginny (she seemed to recover a bit quickly) but I know that was not the point. Nice job! ~Gina :)
Thanks again! I loved writing Penelope. I wanted to write her conversation with Hermione in so that later on, in book seven, Hermione has a clear reason to know for certain that Penelope is half-blood (when she uses her name in Malfoy Manor). x
I love missing moments! There are so many possibilities. This was very cute. You did a lovely job with Ron and Hermione's relationship, the dialogue was very good. I really liked reading from Hermione's point of view, I'm looking forward to reading your other 'After' moments! ~Gina :)
Thanks! This was the first piece of fanfiction I ever wrote, and I was only fifteen at the time, so I'm always pretty nervous about sharing it... I'm glad you enjoyed it! I love missing moments too. :)