This chapter is very good and very well written. You can depend on my work as I am a retired English and Literature Teacher. Your chapter is well scheduled and very well organized.
GR8 STORY LOVE THE PLOT WRITE MORE BUT POS LONGER
Author's Response: Thanks! I think I'll update the next chapter now seeing as how people are enjoying it.
glad she's safe! what do you mean by unforeseen circumstances??? can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Ah jayley, my friend - I can hardly remember myself I wrote this so long ago! But the good thing is, I have got a lot better since then, so the story will hopefully continue to improve right up to the end of the sequel ...
Ah, man. The beginning of it all. It's so random and cute and ah.
That is all I can say: ah.
Author's Response: Yeah soooo random but so cute: ah
Author's Response: Thankies! It's coming right now ...